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<p><a href="http://dx.doi.org/10.19183/how.21.1.15" target="_blank">http://dx.doi.org/10.19183/how.21.1.15</a></p>
<p><font size="4" color="#666"><b>A Virtual Room to Enhance Writing Skills
in the EFL Class</b></font></p>
<p><font size="3">Uso del aula virtual para mejorar las habilidades
de escritura en ingl&eacute;s como lengua extranjera</font></p>
<p align="right"><b>Dayra Piedad Ochoa Alpala</b><br><a href="mailto:dayrapiedad8a@hotmail.com">dayrapiedad8a@hotmail.com</a><br>Universidad de Boyac&aacute;, Colombia</p>
<p align="right"><b>Nieves Medina Pe&ntilde;a</b><br><a href="mailto:seveinmp@hotmail.com">seveinmp@hotmail.com</a><br>Universidad Pedag&oacute;gica y Tecnol&oacute;gica de Colombia</p>
<p>Received: September 2, 2013. Accepted: February 7, 2014.</p>
<p>How to cite this article (APA 6th ed.):<br>Ochoa Alpala, D. P., & Medina Pe&ntilde;a, N. (2014). A virtual room to enhance writing skills
in the EFL class. <i>HOW, 21</i>(1), 62-81. <a href="http://dx.doi.org/10.19183/how.21.1.15" target="_blank">http://dx.doi.org/10.19183/how.21.1.15</a>.</p>
<p>This article is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License. License Deed can be consulted at <a href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/4.0/" target="_blank">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/4.0/</a>.</p>
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<p>This article reports an action research that intended to study to what extent students shape their
writing skill in English through the use of a virtual room. As the study, we randomly selected six ninth
graders in high school from thirty two students at a Colombian private institution. Three instruments
were used, namely, interviews, students&rsquo; artifacts, and journals. The results indicate that the use of virtual
resources enriches students&rsquo; learning process and engages them to communicate and interact with their
classmates through their written creations.</p>
<p><b><i>Key words:</i></b> English as a foreign language, technology, virtual room, writing skill</p>
<hr>
<p>En este art&iacute;culo se presenta una investigaci&oacute;n acci&oacute;n cuyo prop&oacute;sito es estudiar en qu&eacute; medida
los estudiantes forman su habilidad escritural en ingl&eacute;s a trav&eacute;s del aula virtual. Como grupo de estudio,
se seleccionaron al azar seis estudiantes de un total de treinta y dos en una instituci&oacute;n privada
colombiana. Se emplearon tres instrumentos de recolecci&oacute;n de datos: entrevistas, producciones de
los estudiantes y diarios. Los resultados indican que el uso de recursos virtuales enriquece el aprendizaje
de los estudiantes y los motiva a comunicarse e interactuar con sus compa&ntilde;eros a trav&eacute;s de
sus producciones escritas.</p>
<p><b><i>Palabras clave:</i></b> aula virtual, ingl&eacute;s como lengua extranjera, habilidad escritural, tecnolog&iacute;a</p>
<hr>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Introduction</b></font></p>
<p>Education has been widely influenced by deep changes in relation to science and
technology. Teachers have felt the need to incorporate new information and communication
technologies (web pages, chats, blogs, wikis, etc.) into the teaching-learning process,
modifying the way the educational system works. Klopfer, Osterweil, Groff, and Haas (2009)
state: &ldquo;Technologies afford us the ability to convey concepts in new ways that would
otherwise not be possible, efficient or effective, with other instructional methods&rdquo; (p. 4).
These changes are evident in the implementation of new resources into the classroom:
computers, tape recorders, video recorders, video beams, among others. Thus, some teachers
have left aside the use of the board as the only resource for teaching. Klopfer et al. argue that
&ldquo;The emergence of new technologies pushes the educator to understanding and leveraging
these technologies for classroom use&rdquo; (p. 10).</p>
<p>One of the innovative technologies teachers are using in their classes refers to virtual
rooms that offer a cooperative and communicative learning space in which participants
can interact among themselves by using the computer and resources in a simulated
environment. Virtual tools (chat, wikis, web pages) constitute an important aspect of
teenagers&rsquo; daily lives, since they often use technology for different purposes (homework,
entertainment, communication). Pfister, Schuckmann, Beck-Wilson, & Wessner (1998)
state that &ldquo;virtual rooms provide a natural analogue to real life learning situations. Hence,
learners have a background knowledge for orientation and behavior in the learning
environment&rdquo; (p. 112).</p>
<p>Regarding the issues mentioned above, we researched the use of virtual tools in a private
school and noticed that in the English classes students do not have contact with technological
resources and their writing is only focused on the structure of the language. For instance,
students have to build sentences for each verbal tense without having a purpose or a concern
about the uses of such grammatical forms, as shown in the sample text below where students
were asked to write five sentences in past simple.</p>
<blockquote>I saw a dog in street.<br>She found a wallet in cinema.<br>They made the homework of English yesterday.<br>We drank beer in bar.<br>Rosa played in the park. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<p>Based on this information, we as teachers and researchers began to explore the virtual context
to carry out authentic communicative activities, so the following research question emerged:</p>
<p>To what extent does the use of a virtual room shape the EFL writing of students in a
private school?</p>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Literature Review</b></font></p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Virtual Room</i></b></font></p>
<p>Hiltz (1987) defines a virtual room as &ldquo;an interactive communication and learning space
located within a computer system used to create an electronic analogue of the communication
forms that usually occur in a classroom&rdquo; (p. 265). In relation to this definition, a virtual room
becomes a space in which learners can engage in language use for communicative purposes by
interacting with the others through a variety of virtual tools that constitute a powerful
complement for learning situations of the classroom. In addition, this virtual space presents a
combination of image, video, sound, and text, where students can interact and use these
elements simultaneously. In this respect, Tiffin and Rajasingham (1995) assert that in the
virtual classroom students can access and develop a set of actions that characterize a
conventional teaching and learning process involving conversations, document reading,
asking the teacher questions, group work, and so on. All of these actions are carried out in a
simulated way, so physical interaction between teachers and students is not required.</p>
<p>Additionally, the characteristics of virtual rooms imply the use of some e-platforms, such
as blackboard, learning platform, web CT, among others, and in our case, we worked with a
Modular Object-Oriented Dynamic Learning Environment (MOODLE) platform. According
to Dougiamas (1998) such platform is based on socio-constructivism pedagogy. This type of
pedagogy consists of three general concepts: constructivism (Williams & Burden, 1997),
constructionism (Papert & Harel, 1991), and social constructivism (Bruffee, 1986).</p>
<p>Through virtual rooms, learners can share information using a wide variety of texts and
graphic media, including voice and video and build learning communities and work teams by
means of virtual connections, even though people may never physically meet. Students can
also interact with and learn from fellow classmates, exchange ideas, meet with small teams,
and present or participate in training classes.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Virtual Room in EFL Learning</i></b></font></p>
<p>A virtual room constitutes a complement for EFL learning, since it provides students with
a variety of resources (video, image, text, and sound) to practice grammar aspects, reinforce
the topics worked in class, and use the language with communicative purposes. Moreover, a
virtual room involves students&rsquo; cooperative work to accomplish virtual activities related to
simulated environments. They have also the opportunities to share experiences, points of
view, and knowledge by interacting virtually among themselves and the teacher.</p>
<p>In this regard, Rojas (2011) carried out a study about the use of blogs to engage
Colombian adolescents in meaningful communication in a public school. The research project took into account the implementation of a specific blog that proposes activities,
suggestions, strategies, and links to increase written communication in English. She found
that students were encouraged to write and communicate among themselves and concluded
that blogs and other virtual tools are excellent to work with students in a creative and
interesting way.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Writing Skill</i></b></font></p>
<p>Byrne (1988) states that &ldquo;writing refers to the production of graphic symbols which have
to be arranged, according to certain conventions to form words, and words have to be
arranged to form sentences&rdquo; (p. 98). That is why writing constitutes a whole process of
connecting specific elements to build a complete text, which needs to have some cohesion
and coherence requirements in order to communicate related ideas that lead to a global sense.</p>
<p><b>Types of writing.</b> There are different types of writing and Wassman and Rinsky (1997)
separate them into categories like <i>persuasion</i>, in which the author attempts to convince a person
of something to think as he/she does; <i>description</i>, which is the most helpful in creating a picture
of something concrete such as a scene or a person; <i>exposition</i>, in which the author expounds
upon information or ideas, gives information, explains something, clarifies a process, or defines
a concept. This kind of writing is objective and not dependent on emotion; and finally, <i>narration</i>,
in which the writer relates events in sequence. This type of writing recounts a personal
experience or tells a story based on a real or imagined event with all the details getting integrated
in order to create some central themes or impressions and, in the case of fiction, it is created to
entertain the reader. The last two types are the ones promoted by the various activities which are
implemented in the pedagogical strategy of this project.</p>
<p>In regard to the aspects mentioned above, Freed, Burton, and Kelly (as cited in Scott, 1996)
carried out a study involving native speakers of English. It indicated that writers have different
levels of ability in different language models. Using topics requiring narration, description, and
persuasion, college students representing basic, average, and honors writers participated in the
research. The researchers found that descriptive writing was a difficult task for basic writers, an
intermediately difficult discourse for average writers, and an easy task for honors writers. On
the other hand, for basic writers persuasive writing was the most difficult discourse, and it was
placed close to intermediately difficult for average and honors writers.</p>
<p>The previous research evidences the fact that writers may have competence in some of the
types of writing but not necessarily in all of them, and also the role of the writing discourse in
writing competence. Scott (1996) states that writing competence refers to one of the
dimensions, which comprises the overall term <i>communicative competence</i>. In addition, Krashen (as
cited in Scott, 1996) defines writing competence as &ldquo;the abstract knowledge the proficient
writer has about writing&rdquo; (p. 165); it also implies his own perspective and the specific strategies used by him/her while writing. In the next section the type of research, setting, population,
participants as well as instruments and techniques used to collect data will be described.</p>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Research Design</b></font></p>
<p>This project was based on a qualitative paradigm or philosophy which aims to understand
facts by explaining and interpreting results of studies. According to Sandin (2003), qualitative
research is &ldquo;a systematic activity guided to the comprehension of educational phenomenon
and the transformation of the socio-educational sceneries&rdquo; (p. 123). Thus, the project
analyzes and draws conclusions about the implications of using virtual resources to foster
students&rsquo; writing skill.</p>
<p>Following the principles of qualitative paradigm, the study used an action research
methodology, since it is concerned with diagnosing a problem in a specific context, in this
case, students&rsquo; difficulties when writing texts in English, and attempting to solve it in that
context. In regard to this type of research, Parsons and Brown (2002) state: &ldquo;Action
research is a form of investigation designed for use by teachers to attempt to solve
problems and improve professional practices in their own classrooms&rdquo; (p. 32). From
Calhoun&rsquo;s (1994) perspective: &ldquo;Action research is a fancy way of saying let&rsquo;s study what&rsquo;s
happening at our school and decide how to make it a better place&rdquo; (p. 16). So, this type of
research seeks to create knowledge, propose and implement change, and improve
practice and performance.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Participants</i></b></font></p>
<p>The participants to work with in the implementation of the pedagogical strategy were six
ninth grade students. Of this population, three were female and three were male. Their age
range was from 13 to 15 years old. These students were chosen at random to be the study
group. However, from the beginning to the end, the project was carried out with the whole
group of ninth graders.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Method</i></b></font></p>
<p>During the implementation of the proposal, students worked once a week for four
months carrying out eleven workshops focused mostly on texts writing. Each workshop had
activities arranged in coherent sequences to reach different writing aims. Thus, in each
session they had to develop online exercises and use virtual resources to be engaged in the
different topics and, as the last step, they had to create a text to show their understanding of
the whole unit. Students did not use notebooks and papers. <a href="#tab1">Table 1</a> shows the name of the
workshops, the topics dealt with in each one, and the objectives to reach.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="tab1"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04t01.jpg"></a></p>
<p>The following section describes the instruments, techniques, and procedures to
collect data and the ways they contributed to create the categories and answer the
research inquiry.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Instruments, Techniques, and Procedures for Data Collection</i></b></font></p>
<p>To gather information, we used the elicitation and observation techniques and some
instruments such as interviews, students&rsquo; artifacts, and journals. From interviews we got
students&rsquo; perceptions regarding virtual resources; students&rsquo; artifacts revealed information
related to their writing features at the moment of working in the virtual room and the extracts
taken from journals provided data related to their behaviors and attitudes.</p>
<p><b>Elicitation technique.</b> According to Gubrium and Holstein (2001), &ldquo;elicitation
uncovers an articulated informant knowledge&rdquo; (p. 78). The instruments within this technique
which were used to gather information were as follows:</p>
<p><b><i>Interview</i></b>. Through this instrument we gathered some information, thoughts, and
feelings of students in relation to their work in the virtual room. The interview was applied to
some students who were selected at random at the end of the application of all the
workshops. Therefore, students got the opportunity to refer to their perceptions regarding
the way each workshop was applied as well as their motivation and learning goals by working
in it.</p>
<p><b><i>Students&rsquo; artifacts.</i></b> This instrument was used in order to collect samples of students&rsquo;
writings in English (forums, chats, and wikis) and identify its features when working on the
different virtual tasks. Students&rsquo; samples were safe in the personal account of each one of
them and those works were collected and analyzed when students finished each activity
developed in the virtual room.</p>
<p><b><i>Journals.</i></b> This instrument was used to report students&rsquo; reactions and behaviors during
their work in the virtual room. In the next section of the document we present the data
analysis chapter which explains and shows the results of the research carried out and its
categorization.</p>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Data Analysis</b></font></p>
<p>The categorization was carried out by classifying and grouping the common patterns we
identified in the data collected by means of interviews, students&rsquo; artifacts, and journals using
methodological triangulation. Data analysis was based on the grounded theory proposed by
Strauss and Corbin (1997): &ldquo;It is a qualitative method that uses a systematic set of procedures
to develop an inductively derived grounded theory about a phenomenon&rdquo; (p. 26). The main
objective of grounded theory is to expand upon an explanation of a phenomenon by
identifying the key elements in the context and process of the experiment.</p>
<p><a href="#tab2">Table 2</a> shows the research inquiry, the categories, and subcategories that emerged from
the data analysis.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="tab2"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04t02.jpg"></a></p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Enriching Vocabulary to Express Ideas</i></b></font></p>
<p>Language is a complex system which is composed of a series of elements that ensures its
correct use and understanding (grammar rules, coherence, cohesion, vocabulary, among
others). In relation to vocabulary, it is a necessary and important factor in order for learners to
be able to express ideas, opinions, feelings, and thoughts more meaningfully.</p>
<p>We thought it was important to enrich the students&rsquo; vocabulary for the purpose of
enhancing their writing expression by constructing longer and significant texts. In the
research proposal, we designed and used a variety of virtual activities and games where
students had the opportunity to match pictures with abstract concepts, to participate in
memory games, and to play with puzzles.</p>
<p>One of the tools used for collective writing was the wiki. It is an online workplace that
allows members cooperatively to create and edit web pages. Richardson (2006) states the wiki
is a &ldquo;collaborative web space where anyone can add content and anyone can edit content that
has already been published&rdquo; (p. 8). In the research the collective writing activities students
were assigned gave them the opportunity to take part in the creation of magazines and stories,
among others, where each one had a specific function related to the writing of a subtopic or a
part of the whole text. In the following sample taken from a wiki, students wrote
cooperatively the <i>Three Little Pigs</i> story:</p>
<blockquote>There once was a pig who built a straw house was so happy because I had a place of refuge but did
not know that happiness would not last long. Days after a wolf came home and collapsed puff and
blow all the little pig had built, the house of straw was now a total disaster. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93; (Carlitos, Workshop
5, Students&rsquo; Artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>The same aspect was also observed in the following sample:</p>
<blockquote>In the first moment I saw you<br>It was love at first sight<br>With your eyes incandescent<br>And your eyes forecent. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;<br>(Panchita, Workshop 6, Students&rsquo; Artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>On the other hand, after the development of those activities students seemed to use a
more diverse vocabulary according to the kind of text they were writing. They also could
create more complete writings, as Juanita claimed in the interview.</p>
<blockquote>T: What do you think about the use of virtual tools in the English class?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: I think it is good, very good and fun.</blockquote>
<blockquote>T: Why?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: Because I learned lots of things, besides, it helped me to learn vocabulary and verbs. There are
many words that I did not know. Now I can use them in class to talk to my classmates and develop
tests.<sup><a href="#pie1" name="spie1">1</a></sup></blockquote>
<p>In the sample above, the student established that she could use the language in order to
write coherent texts thanks to the vocabulary and grammar use that the activities required.
Moreover, she referred to the implications of knowing another language in her personal and
academic life.</p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Engaging Students in Writing</i></b></font></p>
<p>Over the past few years the use of technology has been increasing in the teaching-learning
process. Teachers have brought new strategies and techniques to the classes. They now have
the opportunity to use useful resources to practice and develop different kinds of tasks. So,
they provide students new learning approaches in a more meaningful and interesting manner
and motivate them to learn while at the same time fostering their language skills.</p>
<p>For this reason, teachers should promote the implementation of virtual tools in the
learning process. In this sense, virtual tools such as wiki, chat, and forum helped students to
practice and foster their writing skill in a cooperative and interactive way. Students used the
language to write about a specific topic and interact with their classmates by answering
questions, giving opinions, and writing comments about the different writings they produced.
In relation to this, Mandal (2009) stated: &ldquo;Being independent and working in a team, gives a
person an opportunity to share himself deeply, meaningfully with others and have access to the vast resources and potential of other human beings&rdquo; (p. 189). Regarding this assertion,
cooperative writing becomes a recursive task, where students can know and teach the others
useful items when creating a paragraph or text cooperatively. Moreover, cooperative writing
allowed students to develop their English writing skill more easily because cooperation helps
them exchange ideas, feelings, and thoughts at the moment of creating their writings.</p>
<p>For instance, in Workshop 9 students wrote a text with the use of the wiki, which allowed
them to know what their partners wrote and go on constructing the text. They had to add
information to the writing taking into account the topic and the purpose of the activity. In this
case, they had to construct a text about a famous person, Jennifer Lopez. She was selected by
a small group of students; the others selected a different famous person.</p>
<blockquote>Carlitos: Jennifer is an actress, singer, dancer, producer and designer of American fashion. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>Pachito: She was born on July 24, 1969 and her real name is Jennifer Lynn Lopez. She is married
with Marc Anthony. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>Panchita: She is the most beautiful women; she sings good songs, she dance very well. And she has
an excellent voice. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>(Workshop 9, Students&rsquo; Artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>At the end of the workshops, we applied an interview in which students talked about the
importance of the virtual tools use in the English writing skill. They mentioned the
advantages of working with those materials when learning a language. We see this in Lolita&rsquo;s
interviews.</p>
<blockquote>T: Ok, What do you think about the use of virtual tools in the English class?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: I think it is good, it is entertaining to work with technology to be updated.</blockquote>
<blockquote>T: Why do you think it is good?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: Well, you feel more motivated when you work with virtual tools, I think that with all of those
resources you can learn and practice many things.</blockquote>
<blockquote>T: What do you think about the way how texts&rsquo; writing was carried out in class?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: It was good, because we knew and learned many things which are important for our English
learning in a creative and dynamic way.</blockquote>
<blockquote>T: How was your experience in class when working in the virtual room?</blockquote>
<blockquote>S: I can say that it was nice, I learned many things, I improved my writing and it motivates me to
study English.<sup><a href="#pie2" name="spie2">2</a></sup></blockquote>
<p>From this sample, we can deduce that students found a fun and creative space to learn
English and complement the formal instruction they received in the classroom. According to
the students&rsquo; answers, the work in the virtual room was productive and got them motivated
towards learning and developing their skills, specially, those concerning writing.</p>
<p>This was also evident in the following notes taken from journals:</p>
<blockquote>There is a lot of noise in the classroom because the computers are not working; the students seem
anxious and distracted. Now, after 15 minutes most of the computers have started to work out and
the students start to make questions to the teachers about the way the workshop is going to be
developed, then the teachers explain the activities, the students participate actively using the virtual
room resources. Sometimes, they ask the teacher for help to solve doubts and get their work
checked . . . most of students have finished the workshop. Some of them review the exercises and
activities they had done. (Journal 1)<sup><a href="#pie3" name="spie3">3</a></sup></blockquote>
<p><b>Writing texts cooperatively.</b> &ldquo;Being independent and working in a team gives a person
an opportunity to share himself deeply, meaningfully with others and have access to the vast
resources and potential of other human beings&rdquo; (Mandal, 2009, p. 189). Regarding this
assertion, cooperative writing becomes a recursive task, where students can know and teach
the others useful items when cooperatively creating a paragraph or text. In the cooperative
learning method when a teacher gives a writing task, the members of the groups work
together to reach certain shared learning goals. In our case, we designed writing activities to
be worked by groups. Each activity was focused on a specific purpose i.e. students had to
create texts or paragraphs in a collaborative way; for instance, poems, stories, songs. It was
easy for them to write because they supported each other.</p>
<p>In the research the cooperative writing activities completed gave students the
opportunity to take part in the creation of magazines and stories, among others, where
each one had a specific function related to the writing of a subtopic or a part of the whole
text. In the following sample taken from a wiki, students wrote cooperatively the <i>Three
Little Pigs</i> story.</p>
<blockquote><b>The three little pigs:</b> Once there were three little pigs who were poor, then went into town to find
work and build their home. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93; (Workshop 5, Students&rsquo; Artifacts, wiki taken from Lolita&rsquo;s account)</blockquote>
<blockquote><b>The three little pigs:</b> The big bad wolf blew and blew and his house collapsed then the two little
pigs ran home from third pig as the buy brick to create your home. shortly after the big bad wolf
came and blew and puff but could not bring down the house making angry and blows air but
cannot because the purpose of it is to eat the three little pigs. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93; (Workshop 5, Students&rsquo; Artifacts,
wiki taken from Panchita&rsquo;s account)</blockquote>
<p>In these samples, students wrote a short story about the three little pigs. They were
organized in a specific group just as the rest of the students. Thus, they were asked to write a
particular part of the story taking into account the previous one. For instance, in the sample
Lolita wrote the beginning of the story and based on that, Juanita could write the next part of
the story. Finally, Panchita wrote the final part of the story according to her partners&rsquo; ideas.</p>
<p><b>Interactive writing.</b> Writing is a complex process that requires time, responsibility, and
commitment. It demands that writers reflect on what they want to write, how to do it and to
have knowledge about the topic they are going to talk about in order to create interesting and
comprehensible writing tasks. Through the use of the forum students could write opinions
about their classmates&rsquo; creations. Each student had the opportunity to read the others&rsquo;
comments and reflections about their texts. In this way, students found another space to write
interactively, which means, they had to create coherent answers about what was said before;
they could also learn new written conversational clues in the virtual interaction with other
people. A sample of what is said above is illustrated in <a href="#fig1">Figure 1</a>, a sample of a forum taken
from Lolita&rsquo;s account.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="fig1"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04f01.jpg"></a></p>
<p><a href="#fig2">Figure 2</a> shows a sample taken from Juanita&rsquo;s account. It belongs to Workshop 6 and the
virtual tool used was the forum.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="fig2"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04f02.jpg"></a></p>
<p><font size="3"><b><i>Shaping Writing Skill Through a Virtual Room</i></b></font></p>
<p>Technology opens a wide range of opportunities for people to learn and have contact with
diverse resources. A virtual room is one of such resources, which allows linking web pages,
videos, games, Microsoft Office documents, and creating your own learning site to place
different kinds of exercises according to personal and academic needs. That is why a virtual
room constitutes an option that teachers should incorporate in their teaching-learning
process: to reinforce the topics worked in class and practice the students&rsquo; skills in a more
attractive way.</p>
<p>In the activities designed through the virtual tools used (wiki, chat, and forum) students
developed different exercises, where they found videos, games, and useful links to be used in
order to practice their writing skill. They had the chance to write phrases, give opinions about
specific topics and their classmates&rsquo; productions, and develop some exercises focused on
feelings and opinions. These were the ways that students could start to make some sense
about what they were writing and set whole ideas to a series of matching sentences. They
learned that they could not communicate with only few sentences but structured paragraphs
that made their expression clearer and meaningful.</p>
<p>For instance, in a forum which was about the creation of a chorus for a song, Panchita
wrote what is shown in <a href="#fig3">Figure 3</a>.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="fig3"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04f03.jpg"></a></p>
<p>Another example of the creation of paragraph and sentence matching in order to
communicate ideas is evident below. It is a sample of a wiki taken from Pepito&rsquo;s account:</p>
<blockquote>Jennifer Lynn Lopez, she is from Bronx, New York, she is a good singer and dancer, she is an
actress. She is married with Marck Antonie. She sing very good, she compouse beautiful songs and
she sings in English and Spanish. She is pretty and young. She has five boyfriends and two beautiful
sons.</blockquote>
<blockquote>Jennifer is the richest person of Latins America. She is a happy woman and she likes dance, sings
and act. Her favorite sport is tennis, and her favorite hobby is travel. She likes eat fruits and
vegtables. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93; (Workshop 9, Students&rsquo; artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>For the creation of the last profile, students were divided into groups and each one
assumed a specific role and task. For instance, one student was responsible for searching for
information about personal facts and other students searched for information about
professional aspects. Finally, they joined the information found and created a whole text
based on all the students&rsquo; ideas.</p>
<p>From these examples we can see that students started to write joined ideas using some
connectors and giving coherence in relation to the content of the ideas. The students
were able to create paragraphs based on their own feelings, which showed the language as a means for them to communicate through complete ideas that make sense for them and
the readers.</p>
<p><b>Giving some sense to writing.</b> Cohesion and coherence are aspects that give texts some
sense in order for them to be understood by people who read them. Without those elements it
is difficult to put ideas into words and communicate complete meanings. Regarding cohesion
we have connectors of content similitude, which make texts whole nets composed of
sentences linked among them. In relation to coherence, it refers to the property of the ideas
being similar in content, pointing out the general meaning of the complete text. According to
Kies (1995): &ldquo;Coherence is &#91;a&#93; product of many different factors, which combine to make
every paragraph, every sentence, and every phrase contribute to the meaning of the whole
piece&rdquo; (p. 123).</p>
<p>When starting to write texts in a language, especially in an unknown one, learners feel as if
they are writing isolated sentences or words and mixing ideas within an only text, which
results in writings that are lists of items about different topics without connection and that are
difficult to understand by readers. In this regard, Kies (1995) states that coherence in writing
is much more difficult to sustain than coherent speech simply because writers have no
nonverbal clues to inform them as to whether their message is clear or not. To avoid this fact,
teachers should create different strategies in order for students to learn to write complete
ideas that are focused on a single sense.</p>
<p>The activities pointed out the function of the language components rather than only their
form, so that when students could observe a grammatical aspect applied in context they were
able to use it later in a similar way, by means of association in order to express their own ideas,
thoughts, and experiences. In the following section of a chat, in which students had to refer to
their last vacations, we can see that the two students used coherence and cohesion elements in
order for them to be understood by their classmates:</p>
<blockquote>Juanita: On my vacation I went to Bogota and I met friends I have not seen for a long time. Also, I
watched television because I like but there I was little bored. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>Carlitos: Wonderful, on my last vacation I went to Cartagena with my parents, I was on the beach
and swan much then I knew a girl pretty. After I bougth things wonderful. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>(Workshop 1, Students&rsquo; Artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>In the previous samples, it is evident that students wrote with a communicative
purpose and joined ideas to shape whole meanings. Coherence and cohesion are also
evident in the students&rsquo; written creations shown in <a href="#fig4">Figure 4</a>. These samples were taken
from the forum in Panchita&rsquo;s and Carlitos&rsquo; account and show a more complex use of
English grammar aspects. In this opportunity, students gave coherence and cohesion to
their writings by keeping a whole topic of discussion along the text, using connectors to explain or add information to their opinions as well as resorting to a specific verbal tense
to refer to different ideas.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="fig4"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04f04.jpg"></a></p>
<p><b>From the reproduction of rules to communicative texts.</b> In the moment of writing,
students sometimes bear in mind the structure of the sentences leaving aside the content of
their compositions. In fact, they are worried about the correct use of grammar rules more
than in the function of them. For this reason, they are not aware of what they write; some of
them only do it because they want to get a high grade for the class, forgetting the goals of
communicative writing.</p>
<p>When students write with communicative purposes, they perceive this activity not as a
duty but as a pleasure. Thus, they give more sense to the texts and feel more motivated
because they know their creations are going to be read by other people and these are not going
to be stored only in their notebooks. Likewise, they can read other compositions of their
classmates which let them know their personal opinions and even themselves while they are
learning.</p>
<p>This communicative approach in students&rsquo; writing is showed in <a href="#fig5">Figure 5</a>, which is a
sample taken from a poem written by Lolita. In this opportunity, students interacted by
means of a forum.</p>
<p align="center"><a name="fig5"><img src="img/revistas/how/v21n1/v21n1a04f05.jpg"></a></p>
<p>The next sample was taken from a chat on likes and dislikes; here students interacted
among themselves to show their preferences in relation to food, sports and hobbies, and to
give opinions about their classmates&rsquo; likes and dislikes.</p>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:28&#93;<b>Panchita:</b> Pachito, do you like pizza, i like to eat pizza very much.</blockquote>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:39&#93;<b>Pachito:</b> no, I do not like pizza, I eat snaks, are more delicious. Pizza is ugly.
And you</blockquote>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:41&#93;<b>Pepito:</b> <i>q nada</i> &#91;nothing&#93;</blockquote>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:44&#93;<b>Juanita:</b> who choose not?</blockquote>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:47&#93;<b>Lolita:</b> hello Pachito, how are you? You know I like to eat much, I like to eat
pizza, snacks and meat.</blockquote>
<blockquote>&#91;14/03/11 22:01:54&#93;<b>Panchita:</b> who is hear...I dislike chees, but I like to eat apples, my mother
gives apples all days. &#91;<i>sic</i>&#93; (Workshop 4, Students&rsquo; Artifacts)</blockquote>
<p>By interacting in this chat, students were able to follow a short virtual conversation, where
they talked about what was to them a familiar topic. They shared some aspects of their lives
with other classmates and used the language they knew to share their likes and dislikes with
their classmates. In spite of their having made some grammar mistakes, they were concerned
in their interaction with the others and it engaged them to write in order to refer to some
aspects and establish a coherent conversation.</p>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Conclusions</b></font></p>
<p>The use of virtual tools promoted a pleasant work atmosphere in the classroom and
encouraged students to write different types of texts based on logical sequences of activities
and online exercises. Throughout the development of the pedagogical proposal we could
detect an increase in students&rsquo; motivation and awareness in relation to their own language
learning when they were writing, since they learned how to use the language in contexts and give a purpose to their writings. They started to see their texts as printed ways to
communicate with their classmates and teachers and express feelings, opinions, and needs.</p>
<p>The results of the study show that a virtual room and resources within it can help learners
to know about a wide range of vocabulary by means of games, online readings, videos, and
interactive activities and avoid acquiring vocabulary to become a rote process. In the first
activities, students still showed a lack of vocabulary, but as the project went on, students
began to use more varied words, discriminated among the kind of vocabulary to use
according to the type of text they were writing, and linked their ideas with connectors.</p>
<p>Cooperative writing by means of wikis fostered self and co evaluation: Students could
teach and learn from the others and their own mistakes in relation to the language use when
writing. Feedback took place when students had to carry out group activities in which they
corrected their classmates to get more coherent and cohesive texts and achieve the goals of
the given exercises; these were not only assessed but also shared with the whole class.</p>
<p>Interactive writing by means of a forum was also an important aspect to enhance writing
skills. Students posted comments about the others&rsquo; texts and opinions, building up personal and
collective meanings so they were given a purpose to write not only to get a mark but mainly to
be heard by a real audience. They cared more about improving their texts and understanding
their classmates&rsquo; postings by looking up unknown words and reviewing verbal tenses.</p>
<p>In the final products that students submitted (poems, wikis, stories, etc.), they used
content and formal aspects such as coherence and cohesion plus they learned how to join
ideas in whole and logical meanings. These aspects made their texts more comprehensible
and significant to the readers and let learners go beyond the reproduction of rules and isolated
sentences that they used to write as a way to represent how a specific verbal tense is made up.</p>
<p>Chats opened up a wide space of interaction and authentic communication where learners
talked about familiar topics and daily life experiences. They wrote faster and more
spontaneously with intrinsic goals, leaving aside external demands such as teachers&rsquo; remarks
and grades and, additionally, they felt free to ask questions of their classmates and get to know
about each other using the language they had learned before. Teachers also participated in the
chat rooms; some students talked to them, which increased the level of confidence and
empathy among them.</p>
<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>Pedagogical Implications</b></font></p>
<p>Virtual resources open up a wide variety of opportunities for students to learn through
resources such as videos, songs, games, forums, and so forth. These are connected to their
immediate needs, feelings, and interests. By using them in the classroom students can find
creative ways to comprehend abstract contents easier and faster.</p>
<p>The use of technology within the classroom lets students play a more active role where
they are aware of their own learning and are more autonomous in relation to their practices as
learners. Technology leads them to create, analyze, research, and communicate contents,
where they learn by experiencing and doing in different contexts.</p>
<p>There is a need for more research on the role of a virtual room to enhance the writing skill
as a process. Tools such as wikis, forums chats, and online resources can help students to go
through different stages when writing texts (brainstorming, prewriting, drafting, revising, and
editing), supported by teachers and other learners. Thus, students can follow a whole process
where they manage their own learning being aware of the ideas they are writing about and the
language they need.</p>
<p>Further research should go beyond e-learning to get into a new concept in teaching:
&ldquo;blended learning&rdquo; (combining online with face-to-face interaction), which has grown in the
last few years. In this study, it was evident that some students wrote rough drafts before
submitting their texts in the virtual room and asked for revision out of the platform, so with
the integration of physical and virtual environments, students were able to get more
meaningful feedback and have access to more varied input and resources to improve their
writing skill and their language use itself.</p>
<p>A final issue to be considered concerning the use of virtual resources in EFL is the
method(s) to assess students&rsquo; performance. Teachers should test not only the products
students create but also the process they follow to achieve the goals of the online exercises;
some students evidence more devotion and concern about their learning by exploring the
materials and activities they are given and looking for additional resources to enrich their
experience, while others just pay attention to the activities to be graded, which is not always
evident in the texts they write.</p>
<hr>
<p><sup><a href="#spie1" name="pie1">1</a></sup>This sample has been translated from Spanish. T stands for teacher and S for student.</p>
<p><sup><a href="#spie2" name="pie2">2</a></sup>Sample translated from Spanish.</p>
<p><sup><a href="#spie3" name="pie3">3</a></sup>Sample translated from Spanish.</p>
<hr>
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<p><font size="3" color="#666"><b>The Authors</b></font></p>
<p><b>Dayra Piedad Ochoa Alpala</b> holds a B.A. in modern languages from Universidad
Pedag&oacute;gica y Tecnol&oacute;gica de Colombia. She currently teaches English as a foreign
language at Universidad de Boyac&aacute; in Tunja (Colombia). She has taught primary and
high school students in different institutions in Boyac&aacute;.</p>
<p><b>Nieves Medina Pe&ntilde;a</b> is a teacher of modern languages from Universidad Pedag&oacute;gica y
Tecnol&oacute;gica de Colombia. Her professional experience has been as both English and
Spanish teacher in primary and secondary levels. She is currently working as a member
of the bilingualism project carried out by the Secretary of Education.</p>
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